I want someone...
I want someone to hold me when I am down I want someone to hug me When I frown I want someone to Kiss my fears away I want someone who promises to stay I want someone to treat me like an equal I want someone to let me be a little vocal I want someone who treats me nice I want someone who takes my advice I want someone who makes me feel beautiful I want someone with whom i feel blissful I know such friends exist I know they are there But why are they hiding in a mist disappearing into thin air ?
Is there a synonym for 'missable' ? This word - 'missable' disturbs the flow of the poem.
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Deletethat is a lovely poem. I read other poems too, they are nice, coming straight from your heart :)
ReplyDeleteThe last line is bang on, I can somehow relate to it