Moon and me

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Standing on the moonlit terrace
I do wait to see you in that glow
I want to melt in your embrace
counting stars as the clouds flow

if clouds are my friends tonight
they'll help me when you come
hide us in darkness as we unite
and witness as we become one

I'll wonder where you are now
I'll think of who are you with
as the fear of doubts come bare
I'll wonder if love is but a myth

till you come, I sit on the terrace
with the moon smiling beside me
till you, the love of my life, comes
and I can no longer feel so lonely

Comments

  1. Ashna 20 November 2012 at 07:30

    Sweet. I love the way you've made the emotions and the images come to my mind. Lovely poem! :)

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  2. के सी 20 November 2012 at 08:00

    Pahala comment crash ho gya :( magar kavita itni sundar hai ki fir se likh rha hoon. aap kamaal hain.

    is kavita ne shaam achchi kar di hai, ek arase baad laga ki kash aesi kavita maine likhi hoti.

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    1. (in)sane mind22 November 2012 at 04:43

      kishore sahab sab aap se seekha hai....its an ultimate compliment

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  3. asteria's canvass20 November 2012 at 13:39

    hey,
    I did not know you wrote poetry..and that too so well..

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  4. art21 November 2012 at 09:57

    amazing renu....the image brings the words to life

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  5. Vinay Leo R.21 November 2012 at 09:59

    yaar, how can tu feel lonely, tumhara love of ur life to hamesha tere heart mein hi hai ;)

    gorgeous poem by the way.

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  6. Brian Miller21 November 2012 at 10:44

    smiles...so warm your longing...for them to be with you...ah dont let love be just a myth

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  7. MS Mahawar21 November 2012 at 23:17

    No Words to Describe this Poem!
    AWesome image with this!
    The also shows everything!

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  8. Deepak Kripal22 November 2012 at 02:54

    wait of the lover for her partner beautifully expressed with poignant words.. superb.. emotional.. well done

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  9. Deepak Kripal22 November 2012 at 02:56

    wait of a lover for her partner captured very beautifully.. very emotional.. superb poem renu

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  10. Sayantini22 November 2012 at 07:13

    lovely, sweet and subtle. I love all the ingredients in your poem :)

    Sayantini Bhattacharya @ another part of me

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  11. K V V S MURTHY22 November 2012 at 08:02

    In love,Everything seems happy...! Good...Go ahead....!!!

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  12. Gokul22 November 2012 at 09:24

    You come up with so sweet lovely poems,great

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  13. Panchali22 November 2012 at 11:21

    The emotions that you identify are very well identified... Great going!

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  14. POOJA...22 November 2012 at 22:44

    amazing slow of emotions with the words... :)

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  15. Upasana23 November 2012 at 06:28

    This is such a beautiful poem! The eternal wait for love of your life.You have beautifully captured the romance and uncertainty in waiting.Brilliant !

    My world, my thoughts, my musings...

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  16. Anunoy Samanta23 November 2012 at 09:19

    Warm... sweet... and beautifully written :-)

    Regards,
    Anunoy Samanta
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    http://just4suzan.blogspot.com

    http://imakemytrip.blogspot.com

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  17. Anonymous23 November 2012 at 09:26

    that was beautiful :) :)

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  18. जयवर्धन कांडपाल23 November 2012 at 21:30

    love it.. nice lines...seems every word came from heart...<3

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  19. Anonymous29 December 2012 at 03:53

    Waiting is such a waste of time. Enjoying the loneliness is when loneliness ends.

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  20. AM21 April 2022 at 05:14

    beautiful and serene

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