Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Moon and me



Standing on the moonlit terrace
I do wait to see you in that glow
I want to melt in your embrace
counting stars as the clouds flow

if clouds are my friends tonight
they'll help me when you come
hide us in darkness as we unite
and witness as we become one

I'll wonder where you are now
I'll think of who are you with
as the fear of doubts come bare
I'll wonder if love is but a myth

till you come, I sit on the terrace
with the moon smiling beside me
till you, the love of my life, comes
and I can no longer feel so lonely

27 comments:

  1. Sweet. I love the way you've made the emotions and the images come to my mind. Lovely poem! :)

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  2. Pahala comment crash ho gya :( magar kavita itni sundar hai ki fir se likh rha hoon. aap kamaal hain.

    is kavita ne shaam achchi kar di hai, ek arase baad laga ki kash aesi kavita maine likhi hoti.

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    1. kishore sahab sab aap se seekha hai....its an ultimate compliment

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  3. hey,
    I did not know you wrote poetry..and that too so well..

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  4. amazing renu....the image brings the words to life

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  5. yaar, how can tu feel lonely, tumhara love of ur life to hamesha tere heart mein hi hai ;)

    gorgeous poem by the way.

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  6. smiles...so warm your longing...for them to be with you...ah dont let love be just a myth

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  7. No Words to Describe this Poem!
    AWesome image with this!
    The also shows everything!

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  8. wait of the lover for her partner beautifully expressed with poignant words.. superb.. emotional.. well done

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  9. wait of a lover for her partner captured very beautifully.. very emotional.. superb poem renu

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  10. lovely, sweet and subtle. I love all the ingredients in your poem :)

    Sayantini Bhattacharya @ another part of me

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  11. In love,Everything seems happy...! Good...Go ahead....!!!

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  12. You come up with so sweet lovely poems,great

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  13. The emotions that you identify are very well identified... Great going!

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  14. amazing slow of emotions with the words... :)

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  15. This is such a beautiful poem! The eternal wait for love of your life.You have beautifully captured the romance and uncertainty in waiting.Brilliant !

    My world, my thoughts, my musings...

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  16. Warm... sweet... and beautifully written :-)

    Regards,
    Anunoy Samanta
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    http://just4suzan.blogspot.com

    http://imakemytrip.blogspot.com

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  17. love it.. nice lines...seems every word came from heart...<3

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  18. Waiting is such a waste of time. Enjoying the loneliness is when loneliness ends.

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