Moon and me
Standing on the moonlit terrace
I do wait to see you in that glow
I want to melt in your embrace
counting stars as the clouds flow
if clouds are my friends tonight
they'll help me when you come
hide us in darkness as we unite
and witness as we become one
I'll wonder where you are now
I'll think of who are you with
as the fear of doubts come bare
I'll wonder if love is but a myth
till you come, I sit on the terrace
with the moon smiling beside me
till you, the love of my life, comes
and I can no longer feel so lonely
Sweet. I love the way you've made the emotions and the images come to my mind. Lovely poem! :)
ReplyDeletethnks ashna....
DeletePahala comment crash ho gya :( magar kavita itni sundar hai ki fir se likh rha hoon. aap kamaal hain.
ReplyDeleteis kavita ne shaam achchi kar di hai, ek arase baad laga ki kash aesi kavita maine likhi hoti.
kishore sahab sab aap se seekha hai....its an ultimate compliment
Deletehey,
ReplyDeleteI did not know you wrote poetry..and that too so well..
i m testing waters...;)
Deleteamazing renu....the image brings the words to life
ReplyDeleteyaar, how can tu feel lonely, tumhara love of ur life to hamesha tere heart mein hi hai ;)
ReplyDeletegorgeous poem by the way.
wldn't be possible without ur help
Deletesmiles...so warm your longing...for them to be with you...ah dont let love be just a myth
ReplyDeletethnx brian
DeleteNo Words to Describe this Poem!
ReplyDeleteAWesome image with this!
The also shows everything!
wait of the lover for her partner beautifully expressed with poignant words.. superb.. emotional.. well done
ReplyDeletewait of a lover for her partner captured very beautifully.. very emotional.. superb poem renu
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Deletelovely, sweet and subtle. I love all the ingredients in your poem :)
ReplyDeleteSayantini Bhattacharya @ another part of me
In love,Everything seems happy...! Good...Go ahead....!!!
ReplyDeleteYou come up with so sweet lovely poems,great
ReplyDeleteThe emotions that you identify are very well identified... Great going!
ReplyDeleteamazing slow of emotions with the words... :)
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful poem! The eternal wait for love of your life.You have beautifully captured the romance and uncertainty in waiting.Brilliant !
ReplyDeleteMy world, my thoughts, my musings...
Warm... sweet... and beautifully written :-)
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Anunoy Samanta
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that was beautiful :) :)
ReplyDeletelove it.. nice lines...seems every word came from heart...<3
ReplyDeleteWaiting is such a waste of time. Enjoying the loneliness is when loneliness ends.
ReplyDeletebeautiful and serene
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