Wednesday, November 14, 2012

your kisses, your touch





Everyday when I look into your eyes
I always feel I can't love you more
Every morning when I feel your warm hug
I know you are the man I would die for

And when my skin burns with your touch
I realize its your soft touch that allures
Every kiss of yours is a promise
Words that come out of your mouth are hard to ignore

Every single minute without you is torture
remember "you'll be always around" you swore
Would give anything to be in your arms
Would present you with all the kisses I have in store.

44 comments:

  1. lovely post. Lots of love,lots of care .
    And the rhyme scheme too , perfect.

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  2. Did the person this is dedicated to read it already, Renu? ;)

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  3. Very sweet and romantic poem full of love <3

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  4. Very romantic indeed.. I'm sure the first reader of this post must be very proud :)

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  5. wow.. its an amazing poem full of love.. i love it.. great work renu..

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  6. Sweet :-)
    some punctuations could be used... what do you say buddy?

    Regards,
    Anunoy Samanta
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    http://just4suzan.blogspot.com

    http://imakemytrip.blogspot.com

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  7. really good poem,
    वैसे भी प्यार तो एक मखमली अहसास है ,जिसे शब्दों में बयां नहीं किया जा सकता ......

    http://achhibatein.blogspot.in/

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  8. Simply lovely. The rhyme was perfectly done. Loved it Renu :) The loved flowed so beautifully in all those words.. Take care!

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  9. Hi, very romantic and you took me again to my love days missing this days :(

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  10. Echoes the olden golden classic luv :)

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    1. yes...true.thats wat i wanted,,,revisit d old kind of romance

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  11. Aaah.. purely romantic.. loved it. . ..

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  12. I am no great shakes as a poet and my wife says I am the most unromantic person because if she wrote such syrupy stuff to woo me I would be looking for faults in her poetic expression.
    Hope your hubs is deserving of your amor for him

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    1. well we women folk hve been cursed with unromantic husbands....my husbands reaction was some what same...but very next day i got a very special gift.

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  13. Wow.
    One suggestion - skip the picture. We just want to read your writing.

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  15. Naughty goddess....My admiration for you has jumped by leaps & bounds after reading this intoxicating piece, and every word is well chosen!:)♥

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    1. thanks darling....hoping to continue with my naughtiness ;)

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  16. Beautiful verse . Straight from the heart .

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  17. romantic.... romantic... kash main bhi likh pata tumhari tarah pyare ke pyaare pyaare geet

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