your kisses, your touch

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Everyday when I look into your eyes
I always feel I can't love you more
Every morning when I feel your warm hug
I know you are the man I would die for

And when my skin burns with your touch
I realize its your soft touch that allures
Every kiss of yours is a promise
Words that come out of your mouth are hard to ignore

Every single minute without you is torture
remember "you'll be always around" you swore
Would give anything to be in your arms
Would present you with all the kisses I have in store.

Comments

  1. art15 November 2012 at 03:09

    The intoxicating love....

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  2. M'Bai Madrasi15 November 2012 at 06:05

    lovely post. Lots of love,lots of care .
    And the rhyme scheme too , perfect.

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  3. Vinay Leo R.19 November 2012 at 06:25

    Did the person this is dedicated to read it already, Renu? ;)

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  4. Sri Valli19 November 2012 at 06:58

    Very sweet and romantic poem full of love <3

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  5. Prasoon Khare19 November 2012 at 08:28

    Very romantic indeed.. I'm sure the first reader of this post must be very proud :)

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  6. Vision Imagination19 November 2012 at 09:48

    Indeed very romantic

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  7. Deepak Kripal19 November 2012 at 09:53

    wow.. its an amazing poem full of love.. i love it.. great work renu..

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  8. Anunoy Samanta19 November 2012 at 10:30

    Sweet :-)
    some punctuations could be used... what do you say buddy?

    Regards,
    Anunoy Samanta
    -------------------------------
    http://just4suzan.blogspot.com

    http://imakemytrip.blogspot.com

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  9. Anonymous19 November 2012 at 10:43

    Love of a lady... I loved it. :)

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  10. achhibatein19 November 2012 at 18:55

    really good poem,
    वैसे भी प्यार तो एक मखमली अहसास है ,जिसे शब्दों में बयां नहीं किया जा सकता ......

    http://achhibatein.blogspot.in/

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  11. Tanya Sehgal20 November 2012 at 00:08

    Simply lovely. The rhyme was perfectly done. Loved it Renu :) The loved flowed so beautifully in all those words.. Take care!

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  12. Jay_Ratz20 November 2012 at 02:16

    Very idealistic view....

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  13. sandeep kumar dan20 November 2012 at 04:16

    Hi, very romantic and you took me again to my love days missing this days :(

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  14. RK20 November 2012 at 05:12

    you've articulated it well...

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  15. Anupam Karn20 November 2012 at 06:21

    Echoes the olden golden classic luv :)

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    1. (in)sane mind20 November 2012 at 08:53

      yes...true.thats wat i wanted,,,revisit d old kind of romance

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  16. Renju20 November 2012 at 06:51

    Aaah.. purely romantic.. loved it. . ..

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  17. Gokul20 November 2012 at 08:38

    good one, romantic...

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  18. sudarshan (simplysud)20 November 2012 at 08:49

    Lovely poem :)

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  19. bungee0520 November 2012 at 09:39

    I am no great shakes as a poet and my wife says I am the most unromantic person because if she wrote such syrupy stuff to woo me I would be looking for faults in her poetic expression.
    Hope your hubs is deserving of your amor for him

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    1. (in)sane mind20 November 2012 at 09:48

      well we women folk hve been cursed with unromantic husbands....my husbands reaction was some what same...but very next day i got a very special gift.

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    2. (in)sane mind20 November 2012 at 09:48

      soo i m not complaining

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  20. Vikram Waman Karve21 November 2012 at 00:24

    Wow.
    One suggestion - skip the picture. We just want to read your writing.

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  22. Panchali21 November 2012 at 04:37

    Naughty goddess....My admiration for you has jumped by leaps & bounds after reading this intoxicating piece, and every word is well chosen!:)♥

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    1. (in)sane mind21 November 2012 at 05:24

      thanks darling....hoping to continue with my naughtiness ;)

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  23. Hem22 November 2012 at 07:15

    Beautiful verse . Straight from the heart .

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  24. जयवर्धन कांडपाल23 November 2012 at 21:27

    romantic.... romantic... kash main bhi likh pata tumhari tarah pyare ke pyaare pyaare geet

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