love me......

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One day you'd know in spite of being ugly, I was beautiful
One day you'd know in spite of being down, I was pure
by the time you'd see my pristine heart
I'd be gone for sure


















Comments

  1. Sri Valli11 September 2012 at 04:21

    Sad yet beautiful..

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  2. Unknown11 September 2012 at 04:58

    sad yet true...but still....renu,nicely gathered words and beautifully thot of...the lines show u think from your heart n write from your mind...

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  3. art11 September 2012 at 05:07

    very nice...expressive

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  4. gunjan kumar12 September 2012 at 06:50

    beautiful but made me sad.

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  5. Unknown12 September 2012 at 20:46

    Lovely poem. :)

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  6. gurufrequent13 September 2012 at 01:36

    दर्द तेरी खुशियों से भी पाक है,
    ये तो तेरे होने का एक एहसास है !
    http://gurufrequent.blogspot.in/2012/02/blog-post.html

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  7. Anonymous13 September 2012 at 11:33

    Heart Breaking.....:( I am not that much into love tales but really loved this one..:)

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  8. के सी 13 September 2012 at 23:25

    Kya bat hai... wah.

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  9. Bhavikkshah16 September 2012 at 02:46

    HEY HI,
    NEW TEMPLATE..I like it..good...
    regards
    bhavik shah

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  10. Anonymous18 September 2012 at 11:07

    very factual & emotional lines !

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  11. sathish30 September 2012 at 21:11

    poignant... this is what is called right on words

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  12. R K Bajpai1 October 2012 at 10:14

    Sad..

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