You miss me,
That’s what you say;
You miss me,
You cry every day.
I am missable,
Just like old
wine,
I am better off,
That's what everyone
opine.
If I was good,
If I was so nice;
Why did he leave?
Why am I the one
paying the price?
Is there a synonym for 'missable' ? This word - 'missable' disturbs the flow of the poem.
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Deletethat is a lovely poem. I read other poems too, they are nice, coming straight from your heart :)
ReplyDeleteThe last line is bang on, I can somehow relate to it