I want someone...

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I want someone to hold me
when I am down
I want someone to hug me
When I frown

I want someone to
Kiss my fears away
I want someone
who promises to stay

I want someone to
treat me like an equal
I want someone to
let me be a little vocal

I want someone
who treats me nice
I want someone
who takes my advice

I want someone who
makes me feel beautiful
I want someone
with whom i feel blissful

I know such friends exist
I know they are there
But why are they hiding in a mist
 disappearing into thin air ?


Comments

  1. Gokul3 January 2013 at 08:28

    Excellent,the flow of the poem is reflected even in the font style.

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  2. Renju3 January 2013 at 08:41

    Wow. .loved it especially the last line. . . Sometimes even after being in a midst of crowd, we feel so lonely and ardently seek someone to shower love solely upon us!!

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  3. Some solved riddles3 January 2013 at 09:06

    perfect work
    nice poem

    and the new template is also beautiful......

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  4. Anonymous4 January 2013 at 00:44

    Maybe because they want you to take a step forward? Smooth flow of feelings with simple words beautifully penned! :)

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  5. Anonymous4 January 2013 at 03:26

    This poem reflects so much longing to be accepted and loved. Perhaps we all feel this from time to time. I know I have often. Someone to take you as you are and be ok with you being yourself yet be able to lift a mood without words. Rarely we find people like this as we get older and even if we do the connection can be short lived or mistaken unlike in childhood friendships. But perhaps that's why dogs can actually be the best companions.

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  6. Anonymous4 January 2013 at 07:26

    Too much wants. hope you get it all in good measure.
    But the Question is, what can you give!

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  7. Anonymous4 January 2013 at 08:56

    A give and take question. Perhaps in another's time of loneliness or grief the favour is humanely returned without question or want only a recognition of the heart.

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  8. Panchali4 January 2013 at 09:09

    Excellent style and language...!!
    He's listening, and he'll be there...soon :)
    Lovely one, Goddess !

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  9. Anonymous4 January 2013 at 10:12

    In the society I live in, matters of the heart are hidden under a thick carpet of pride and encouraged to be kept to oneself. To speak freely with feeling is seen as having emotional issues. Unfortunately this can lead to suicide at the most extreme and regrettable situation. Fortunately this is changing with each new generation but far too many people express emotion so freely like you have here. Expression of the mind is beautiful and honest something I feel you could teach many people.

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    1. Anonymous4 January 2013 at 18:31

      May I edit. Far too few people rather than far too many. My apologies.

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    2. (in)sane mind4 January 2013 at 23:37

      Thank u atlast i get a praise from u..u made my day..:)

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    3. Anonymous5 January 2013 at 04:01

      I praised you already I'm sure. I can feel the admiration as I write my comments. Looking forward to your next post. F.

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  10. AmitAag4 January 2013 at 21:45

    Lovely poem, Renu:)
    All the best! May your wish come true!!

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  11. (in)sane mind4 January 2013 at 23:40

    :)

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  12. Sri Valli5 January 2013 at 03:58

    Beautiful poem. Everyone wants that 'Someone'
    But, we should also try to that 'someone' :)

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  13. provoqd5 January 2013 at 06:53

    Hi Renu,

    Indeed, we all need someone in our lives, to take care of us and whom we can take care of. This poem reminds me of the movie 'Life of Pi' wherein Pi longs for the presence of another human and finds comfort in Richard Parker. However, the beast shows no feelings towards him.
    Lovely poem Renu, keep up the good work. :)

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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  14. sanjeev arya5 January 2013 at 09:27

    awesome :)

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  15. Café Reminiscence6 January 2013 at 01:10

    Beautiful, soft .

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  16. Nasir7 January 2013 at 10:46

    Brilliant Work and All the best ;)

    Keep Blogging!

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  17. ekta khetan10 January 2013 at 00:48

    well, here I am :)

    Well echoed my thoughts and yes you can run to me whenever u need that someone :)
    ____

    http://ektakhetan.blogspot.com

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  18. Manjulika Pramod20 January 2013 at 07:20

    Its simple but conveys so much...

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  19. Unknown21 January 2013 at 01:56

    I want someone
    who will let me be me
    for which I can go
    weak on my knee....:)


    P.S. that continuous rhythm was really nice.

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  20. Betuke Khyal22 January 2013 at 01:06

    milega... zaroor milega. Aur tab tak? Ekla chalo re

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  21. Tarang Sinha26 January 2013 at 06:42

    Lovely poem...nicely written!:)

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  22. The Solitary Writer2 February 2013 at 02:24

    Renu...thank you so much... This is a perfect lyrics...a very good poem...

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  23. FreedomOfThinking Blog14 February 2013 at 04:03

    Hi, you run such a helpful domain, on it! Also I would like to ask you one thing that I am curious of. Is that a paid theme that you can purchase online or a regular one?

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  24. Anonymous27 February 2013 at 10:20

    absolutely enthralling... simple and yet surreal... the last stanza, intense in intent, would do better with some rephrasing...

    great work...

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