I AM HATING IT....

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I write
I read
nails i bite
stories i feed

Nothing seem good
nothing seems nice
nothing can lift my mood
nothing is as per my choice

All of a sudden
I am short of words
Writing seems like a burden
nothing seem to stir my chords

What to do?
Or what not to do?
is all i wonder
and it leaves me feeling like a FOOL.

Comments

  1. Vikram Waman Karve8 December 2012 at 10:47

    Keep Writing. You will start LOVING IT

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  2. Vinay Leo R.8 December 2012 at 10:51

    Hmm

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  3. Deepak Kripal8 December 2012 at 17:51

    doesn't seem to be a burden yet.. :)

    beautiful poem RENU..

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  4. Tanya Sehgal9 December 2012 at 05:23

    This was a very deep piece, but maybe its a writer's block kinda stuff. SO, just get going, you would regain the lost imagination & urge to write soon Renu dear :) Take care!

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  5. Obsessivemom9 December 2012 at 09:04

    .. but we're loving it. :-)

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  6. Woman'n'Beyond9 December 2012 at 10:09

    nice one, you hate it, I loved it!

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  7. Bikash Ch10 December 2012 at 02:42

    Ah! this is exactly what happens to me sometimes...its a crazy kind of feeling.

    Nice poem. Thank Renu

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  8. Unknown10 December 2012 at 07:10

    Go On....we all face it sometime or another

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  9. Ashna 10 December 2012 at 07:57

    I think we all know this feeling. Sometimes nothing seems just right. I think the best way is to live through it, and when the time comes, it'll automatically get better and come back to you :)

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  10. Shamsud Ahmed10 December 2012 at 08:40

    Nice !

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  11. Sri Valli13 December 2012 at 05:23

    Happens mostly during writers blog...You expressed the pain very well...

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  12. Janhvi13 December 2012 at 19:57

    What a nice little poem! A great read! :)

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  13. Anonymous29 December 2012 at 03:32

    Do something else even wash the dishes and if that don't work....Write it out....write the negative feelings and the positive feeling will follow with lots of inspiration. X

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  14. Anonymous27 January 2013 at 16:32

    You got through it! I've read recently that even by forcing yourself to use the smile muscles in your face you will begin to feel happier instantly.

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